"When Things Turn Ugly" Film Analysis

Conor and I made a film called "When Things Turn Ugly", it is about two men named Egbert and Cuthbert who are good friends. We see Conor (Egbert) walk in the room and me (Cuthbert) is sitting in the room, firstly we used match on action where conor walked through the door, then he greats me with a "yo". Then we used the eye-line shot where he looks at me and I look at him.

Then you see him walk over to me and we do our special handshake with a close up on our hands. Then it all turns sour when Cuthbert tells Egbert that he saw his girlfriend and thought she was looking a "piff ting". Then Egbert reacts really badly and starts to get mad and start a fight with Cuthbert tells him to "come at me bro" then Cuthbert said "pipe down" then he pushes him away and then he swings for me and Cuthbert dodges it, then I go to punch him but he blocks it and punches me in the face to knock me out, and it changes shot to a point of view shot to show Egbert punching Cuthbert in the face to knock him out. Then we see a shot of Cuthbert on the floor not moving leaving the audience wondering if he is dead or not...